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Trimming your fingernails - 12/04/2013, 小姨 said it is time to remove your mittens and let your fingers to exercise and explore liao... So, Mummy got to trim your fingernails first.. ...
11 years ago
aiya, ah sue ah yi dunno how to read chinese, so dunno if the translation is correct or not.
ReplyDeletebut here are some corrections:
1) I "went" to the zoo...
2) There are many animals at the zoo, such as giraffes... (all the animals need to have an 's' at the end: monkeys, camels, lions etc)
3) "My sister likes..." <-- how come from brother became sister???
4) We left the zoo in the afternoon
My elder brother brought my younger brother to zoo.
ReplyDeleteThere are many animals at the zoo, such as giraffes, elephants, rhinoceros, monkeys, camels and crocodiles.
My younger brother likes the tigers and lions the most.
They left the zoo in the afternoon.
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(1)why brother, sister... all in the mess
(2)write properly and take it seriously
kai kai wants to see your next essay today...