Friday, 27 March 2009

English 3



kai kai ah yi , nah....my english 3 !!!
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  1. nano ki27 March 2009 at 06:47

    My brother is thirteen years old.

    He has graduated from primary school and is going to secondary school when shool reopens.

    He puts on his school uniform. His trousers are green in colour. He looks smart.

    I want to be the same as my brother and study in secondary school in future.
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    (1) is thirteen not sixteen
    (2) "his trousers colour is green", sentence is
    correct but need to put in apostrophe,
    trousers' colour
    (3) last paragraph : i want to.... not i went to
    (4) 学in this case cannot use 'learn'
    (5) he looks very handsome. (correct)

    ang ke shin, cannot translate word by word...
    kai kai ah yi is anticipating your next essay..

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  2. stargal29 March 2009 at 04:28

    last sentence: "In the future, I want to study in secondary school like my brother."

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