A lot of thank you to kai kai be my internet teacher......
This is my second english ...... " My sister
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11 years ago
Thumbs up for Ke Shin, the essay is good...no significant mistake...But I think the last sentence should be phrase like this...'She can do her homework fast and good.'
ReplyDeleteGambate, Ke Shin :)
ang ke shin, got grammar mistakes...
ReplyDelete(1)my sister is singular, therefore, it shoud
be "my sister studies.." not "study"
(2)she "uses" not "use"
(3)no need put "the" in the sentence. She
uses computer everyday
overall is good... where is your third essay ???
come, let ah sue ah yi see... hmm...
ReplyDeletea) spelling error = healthy
b) she can do her homework "quickly" and "properly", or you can also use "well" instead of "properly"
yes, this essay is done quite well. keep up the good work!
oh stargal is ah sue ah yi , happy to meet u ...thank you ah sue ah yi correct my english !
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